That's a great opening! I shall be upset if you don't keep going with this one because I want to know what happens next...
I especially like your little hints about what the world is like. Makes you want to know more as well as how it got like that and so on. Same thing about her father and the books. Even just a few hints about him and you have a real character there already.
That's a great opening! I shall be upset if you don't keep going with this one because I want to know what happens next...
I especially like your little hints about what the world is like. Makes you want to know more as well as how it got like that and so on. Same thing about her father and the books. Even just a few hints about him and you have a real character there already.
Really good!