This is so unsettling and chilling! You really honed in on the vastness and seeming emptiness of space in such a masterful way, and the interspersed cuckoo definitions were a fantastic touch!
Thank you so much for reading the piece and your comments, Bridget. I like to weave multiple layers into my stories, even if they're sometimes a bit cryptic!
This is so unsettling and chilling! You really honed in on the vastness and seeming emptiness of space in such a masterful way, and the interspersed cuckoo definitions were a fantastic touch!
Thank you so much for reading the piece and your comments, Bridget. I like to weave multiple layers into my stories, even if they're sometimes a bit cryptic!
After reading this I think I must retire from writing. It’s brilliant!
Nooo, don't do that! 😢 - but thank you for the compliment. 😛
Sounds familiar...
'Space Eggspectations' 😜
Oh, this didn't go where I was thinking. Great work Johnathan. I won't be picking up random eggs any time soon.
Thank you! I didn't know where it was going either until the very end. Someone suggested to end it at the "What?" - very dramatic!